Sentence Correction

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In his best-selling book The Omnivore's Dilemma, which social critics see as yet another piece of evidence to support their thesis of a burgeoning interest in natural food among Americans, Michael Pollan elucidates industrial farming, explains organic farming, and discusses hunting and gathering food for oneself.

In his best-selling book The Omnivore's Dilemma, which social critics see as yet another piece of evidence to support their thesis of a burgeoning interest in natural food among Americans, Michael Pollan elucidates industrial farming, explains organic farming, and discusses hunting and gathering food for oneself. - Correct

Initially i was a little weary about the idiom evidence to support but since all the options use the same idiom there is no issue. I thought the idiom should be evidence in support of .. but i've checked. both idioms are correct. Evidence to support that and Evidence in support of

Michael Pollan, in his best-selling book The Omnivore's Dilemma, which social critics see as yet another piece of evidence to support their thesis of a burgeoning interest in natural foods among Americans, elucidates industrial farming, explaining organic farming and discussing hunting and gathering food for oneself. - In his book Michael does three things, elucidates industrial farming, explains organic farming and discusses hunting and gathering food for oneself. "explaining" modifies the entire preceding clause. It seems to indicate that in the process of elucidating industrial farming, Micheal explains organic farming and discusses .blah blah.. which is incorrect. We are given a list of three distinct items and these items should be put in parallel.

In his best-selling book The Omnivore's Dilemma, elucidating industrial farming, explaining organic farming, and discussing hunting and gathering food for oneself, Michael Pollan gives social critics yet another piece of evidence to support their thesis of a burgeoning interest in natural food among Americans. - In his best selling ... should be followed by Michael .

Michael Pollan, in his best-selling book The Omnivore's Dilemma, serving as yet another piece of evidence to support the thesis of a burgeoning interest in natural food among Americans, elucidates industrial farming, explains organic farming, and discusses hunting and gathering food for oneself. - This seems to indicate that Michael is himself serving as an evidence.


In his best-selling book The Omnivore's Dilemma, which is seen by social critics as yet another piece of evidence to support their thesis of a burgeoning interest in natural food among Americans, Michael Pollan elucidates industrial farming, explaining organic farming and discussing hunting and gathering food for oneself. - In his best selling book.. should be followed by Michael Pollan

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