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by logitech » Thu Dec 18, 2008 2:44 pm
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by 720dreaming » Thu Dec 18, 2008 3:03 pm
Interesting question.

Think compared to is wrong. Simply just need "to." I prefer apples to oranges. Not I prefer apples compared to oranges. The use of the word convinced, leads me to think that "will" is better than "would."

I got with A.

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by mals24 » Thu Dec 18, 2008 3:13 pm
Agree with A

The airlines executives are convinced that just as 1/3 blah blah, many travelers will use travel agents.

Correct idiom is prefer X to Y, rule out C, D, E

Between A and B. We don't need subjunctive 'would' The executives are convinced about the fact so use will. Subjunctive would be fine if the executives were not too sure about the fact or if they were hoping for the fact to be true.

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by logitech » Thu Dec 18, 2008 3:15 pm
mals24 wrote:Agree with A

The airlines executives are convinced that just as 1/3 blah blah, many travelers will use travel agents.

Correct idiom is prefer X to Y, rule out C, D, E

Between A and B. We don't need subjunctive 'would' The executives are convinced about the fact so use will. Subjunctive would be fine if the executives were not too sure about the fact or if they were hoping for the fact to be true.
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by logitech » Thu Dec 18, 2008 3:15 pm
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by iamcste » Thu Dec 18, 2008 3:31 pm
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by iamcste » Thu Dec 18, 2008 3:40 pm
Different approach


Long sentences...look for our modifier friends

First look--B and D gone

Restrictive modifiers are used in non resrtictive way

second look, Subject verbal agreeement

The number of people who purchase

The number of ..takes a singular verb and not plural

Eliminate E

C--- growing number of people purchasing....akward

But there is one more error

Online executives are convinced...( "that" is missing. A clause is introduced by "that")

Yes, Idioms work faster but go slim on exam ..dont put additonal weight on your body..read somwhere..Ohh Tip off ( :? ) the day

Choose A

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by ronniecoleman » Thu Dec 18, 2008 10:10 pm
hINT: airline executives are convinced -----so no would

Despite + Noun phrase

Despite the fact ---out
convinced + that

now choose your option

Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 12:07 am Post subject: plane tickets online
Despite the growing number of people who purchase plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced that, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers to automatic teller machines, many travelers will still use travel agents.

A. growing number of people who purchase plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced that, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers to automatic teller machines, many travelers will
B. growing number of people who purchase plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers to automatic teller machines, that many travelers would
C. growing number of people purchasing plane tickets online, airline executives are convinced, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers as compared to automatic teller machines, many travelers will
D. fact that the number of people purchasing plane tickets online is growing, airline executives are convinced, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers as compared to automatic teller machines, that many travelers would
E. fact that the number of people who purchase plane tickets online are growing, airline executives are convinced that, just as one-third of bank customers still prefer human tellers compared with automatic teller machines, many travelers would
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by logitech » Thu Dec 18, 2008 10:19 pm
ronniecoleman wrote:hINT: airline executives are convinced -----so no would

Despite + Noun phrase

Despite the fact ---out
convinced + that
Great stuff Ronnie!

Whats up with Despite the fact ?
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by acecoolan » Thu Dec 18, 2008 10:54 pm
ronniecoleman wrote: hINT: airline executives are convinced -----so no would

Despite + Noun phrase

Despite the fact ---out
convinced + that
Ronnie - do u mean to say - its always wrong or its just more wordy here?

https://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/des ... t4941.html

Though this one had many other clues to throw the wrong options out, the OA for the question from mgmat forum, does start with 'Despite the fact that' and it has Stacey's blessing as well.

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by logitech » Thu Dec 18, 2008 11:01 pm
Compare the use of despite:

1. Despite the fact that I left work early, I nevertheless got home late.

2. Despite having left work early, I nevertheless got home late.

In sentence 1, "I left work early" could also function as an independent sentence.

In sentence 2, "having left work early" cannot function as an independent sentence.
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by ronniecoleman » Thu Dec 18, 2008 11:10 pm
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despite the fact is not always wrong..just too wordy..

the eg you are showing me ...has lots of grave errors in other options so we have to choose the wordy option..

I feel that

if we have mistakes like idiom mismatch , pronoun error, subveb basic grammar errors they always take precedence over Wordiness .
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by acecoolan » Thu Dec 18, 2008 11:15 pm
ronniecoleman wrote:@@acecoolan

despite the fact is not always wrong..just too wordy..

the eg you are showing me ...has lots of grave errors in other options so we have to choose the wordy option..

I feel that

if we have mistakes like idiom mismatch , pronoun error, subveb basic grammar errors they always take precedence over Wordiness .
Cool. Thanks ronnie.

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by vivek.kapoor83 » Fri Dec 19, 2008 12:51 am
ronniecoleman wrote:hINT: [
Despite + Noun phrase

Despite the fact ---out
convinced + that
Ronnie : Would appriciate if u can elaborate on Noun phrase.How to use this ?

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by iamcste » Fri Dec 19, 2008 1:40 am
ronniecoleman wrote:

if we have mistakes like idiom mismatch , pronoun error, subveb basic grammar errors they always take precedence over Wordiness .

Wordiness come into picture when you have two grammtically options and you have to choose a better one !!

hence, first try to choose "grammatical errrors" Wordiness occupies last rung...

yes, if something is truely akward dont waste time in analyzing the optin