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Application Essay

by yvichman » Sun Aug 17, 2008 5:29 am
I will be applying to business school in the next couple of months and need some help. First I will tell you a bit about myself:

I received my undergrad in Sociology/Criminal Justice in 2003. My plan was to get involved in law enforcement but post graduation I didn't get accepted to the nassau county police. Every year there are thousands of applicants and only a couple hundred are admitted. I found a job working for a startup ecommerce company. Instead of pursuing law enforcement I stuck with the ecommerce company b/c I truely enjoyed my work and the environment I was in. After 3+ years I worked my way into a management position. I managed the logistics department and delegated responsibility to both the customer service and shipping departments.

Due to family reasons I moved out of the country and now reside in Israel. Now that I have to start fresh I really want to go back to school for an MBA. I truely love management and the responsibilities/expectations that come with it.

My reason for going back to get my MBA is as follows: I want my carear to stay in business development/management, as opposed to my undergrad focus. I want to further develop my skills in management. I also want to further my skills in areas I have no formal knowledge (ex:marketing). I also believe it will help me network in finding a job upon graduation. Without obtaining an MBA I feel I won't be able to successfully find what I'm looking for in Israel.

How do I go about portraying my reasons for an MBA on the essay without making it look like I wasted my whole undergrad experience studying something I no longer have an interest as a career? Are my reasons for obtaining an MBA going to be frowned upon? Or are they completely valid?

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by Lisa Anderson » Mon Aug 18, 2008 3:05 pm
Dear yvichman,

Your reasons are completely valid and make sense based on your professional experience. A very small percentage of MBAs are doing anything related to their bachelor's degrees and it is not uncommon to move into professional work that differs from your major in undergrad. I would not waste anymore of your energy worrying about what your bachelor's degree is in, and there is no reason to justify that degree or the career you have had. What is important is how your current career path and life experiences has shaped your future career goals AND how the MBA fits into that future path.

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