In a blow to those who still harbored the illusion that E-mail exchanges are private, a watchdog group recently uncovered a trick for enabling an interloper to rig an E-mail message so that this person will be privy to any comments that a recipient had added as the message is forwarded to others or sent back and forth.
A. who still harbored the illusion that E-mail exchanges are private, a watchdog group recently uncovered a trick for enabling an interloper to rig an E-mail message so that this person will be privy to any comments that a recipient had added
B. who had still been harboring the illusion that E-mail exchanges are private, a watchdog group recently uncovered a trick for enabling an interloper to rig an E-mail message so that this person was privy to any comments that a recipient might have added.
C. who still were harboring the illusion that E-mail exchanges are private, a watchdog group recently uncovered a trick enabling an interloper to rig and E-mail message so that this person is privy to any comments that a recipient would add.
D. still harboring the illusion that E-mail exchange are private , a watchdog group recently uncovered a trick that enables an interloper to rig an E-mail message so that this person will be privy to any comments that a recipient might add
E. still harboring the illusion that E-mail exchanges had been private, a wathchdog group recently uncovered a trick that will enable an interloper to rig and E-mail message so that this person was privy to any comments that a recipient might add.
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{A} Tense issue - recipient had added as the message is forwarded
{B} Tense issue - that a recipient might have added
{C} "who still were harboring the illusion" is awkward; "would" is not correct usage here
{E} Tense issue - had been private
[spoiler]{D}?[/spoiler]
{B} Tense issue - that a recipient might have added
{C} "who still were harboring the illusion" is awkward; "would" is not correct usage here
{E} Tense issue - had been private
[spoiler]{D}?[/spoiler]
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The credited response is D .
A detailed explanation is given by gmat pill instructors on gmatclub . here is the link
https://gmatclub.com/forum/gmat-pill-pre ... 52791.html
A detailed explanation is given by gmat pill instructors on gmatclub . here is the link
https://gmatclub.com/forum/gmat-pill-pre ... 52791.html
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Hi abhasjha,
While this SC is wordy, the correct answer is based on standard verb and pronoun rules.
1) Pronouns - The opening of the sentence states that "In a blow to THOSE...."; here, the word "those" is a pronoun. In the answers, we see that some have an extra pronoun and some don't. Since we already have a pronoun, we do NOT need another pronoun immediately next to it. That extra pronoun is redundant (and unnecessary). Eliminate A, B and C.
2) Verbs - Between D and E, we have the verbs "enables" (present tense) and "will enable" (future tense). Since the watchdog group "recently uncovered the trick", we're dealing with something that's happening in the immediate present. The verb "enables" is required here. Eliminate E.
Final Answer: D
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While this SC is wordy, the correct answer is based on standard verb and pronoun rules.
1) Pronouns - The opening of the sentence states that "In a blow to THOSE...."; here, the word "those" is a pronoun. In the answers, we see that some have an extra pronoun and some don't. Since we already have a pronoun, we do NOT need another pronoun immediately next to it. That extra pronoun is redundant (and unnecessary). Eliminate A, B and C.
2) Verbs - Between D and E, we have the verbs "enables" (present tense) and "will enable" (future tense). Since the watchdog group "recently uncovered the trick", we're dealing with something that's happening in the immediate present. The verb "enables" is required here. Eliminate E.
Final Answer: D
GMAT assassins aren't born, they're made,
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I thought words such as those and these should be explicitly followed by the noun to avoid ambiguity. At least that's what MGMAT SC says?
So I ended up with C.
So I ended up with C.
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D. still harboring the illusion that E-mail exchange are private , a watchdog group recently uncovered a trick that enables an interloper to rig an E-mail message so that this person will be privy to any comments that a recipient might add
I do not agree with D for the following reason : "E-mail exchange ARE"
IMO none of the answer choices seem right . Please help me out
I do not agree with D for the following reason : "E-mail exchange ARE"
IMO none of the answer choices seem right . Please help me out